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Friday, February 4, 2011

Direct Orders To....

Rock out like you just got a new song and you have listened to it 5 times in a row because you love it!
Rock out like you have someone to play in the rain with
Rock out like your strutting your new kicks
Rock out like you feel as if you could run forever and not get tired
Rock out like your mom has cancer and they just found the cure so she doesn’t have to suffer anymore
Rock out like its happy hour at Starbucks
Rock out like feel as if nothing could go wrong
Rock out like nothing can stop you
Rock out like that moment when you play a sick drum beat and it just flows
Rock out like you and your buds are going on a road trip across America with no parental supervision
Rock out like you don’t care what other people think of you
Rock out like you just found a new friend
Rock out like the sun comes out and it’s finally spring after a long winter
Rock out like that time when you can’t stop smiling and you don’t know why
Rock out like its Thursday but you had the best day ever and things are just going to keep getting better because tomorrow is Friday
Rock out like everything’s gonna be alright!!

9 comments:

  1. I liked this. A few of the lines I thought were worded well were Rock out like its Thursday but you had the best day ever and things are just going to keep getting better because tomorrow is Friday, Rock out like you feel as if you could run forever and not get tired. I liked the deep ones too like the one about concer, but maybe try and reorganize each line because the cancer one is really deep but then the next like in about happy hour. try to tell a story with the organization. But the lighter ones first and then get deaper and deeper...

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  2. I'm all sad-ish now, these all make me think of summer time!

    Good job altogether, I giggled and smiled all the way through

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  3. The first line is awesome and true. Who doesn't love their new favorite song? Great work. I truly, honestly enjoyed reading this. Rock out!

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  4. I like the one, "Rock out like its happy hour at starbucks" :)

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  5. I really liked, "Rock out like you don’t care what other people think of you"

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  6. My favorite line was "Rock out like that time when you can’t stop smiling and you don’t know why." I love that. Smiling just has that amazing effect of making you feel happy. When I feel out of sorts(sad, mad, pouting...you know) my sister tells me to smile. It always helps for some reason.

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  7. Cosmo Kramer, Thanks for that, it really helps next time I will work on that! Trinity, Sometimes I feel the same way!

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  8. "Rock out like its Thursday but you had the best day ever and things are just going to keep getting better because tomorrow is Friday", I can totally relate to this its awesome i loved it!

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